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    Please post any typographical, grammatical, or spelling errors here.

    Please list the quest that contains the error, or in the case of dialogue the quest it is before or after if applicable.

    Screen shots are appreciated.

    Thanks!

    PS I think we should have a contest to see who can find the most misplaced apostrophes.
    Last edited by Cordelia; 10-08-2011 at 10:55 PM.
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    Smile Grammatical issue

    In Tony's Grow your own Quest, it reads "Now that you've have the....." you do not need have after the word you've.

    Just letting you know.....

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    Default "Find the Totem of Beauty" Quest Wording Error

    The second half of the quest ends with "or". ...or what? :P

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    Skye Gift that says Welcome to Ravenwood Fair

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    Middle gift instead of saying Welcome to Ravenskye City it says Welcome to Ravenwood Fair
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    When talking to William in the beginning of the Zeph the Wind Spirit quest, your avatar's first answer is, "Wind spirt?" It's missing an I.

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    In the instructions for Rebuilding the Grand Library, Pt. 3, it tells us to collect from the library or "defeate" vine monsters to find blueprints.

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    filed these up until this point! thanks for all the help!
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    Restoring Leon - the quest tells you that you'll need 7 stones, when in reality you need 8. Also, why is the quest icon stones?
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    Default Typos, grammar errors, cut off text, etc

    I just completed the hall of heros quest and it said i had a quest from Annie however there was no quest to complete. I reloaded my game and the quest from annie icon was gone. So now I have no more quests?

    Also in the quest it went to Annie and Annie just said what she says if you click on her... btw there are some spelling errors in that...

    Annie says

    We were flying away from the talon empire to search for ravesnkye city..........Suddenly lighting hit our airship......

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    Back to Work quest. Callie asks for 5,000 coins, while the quest asks for 10,000.

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    Taking it in Stride Quest - Thomas Says: "I'm thirty-three, haven't done flap with my life, and the first thing I do when I come to Ravenskye is to try and pull of some dumb scheme?

    Should be: ....try to pull off some dumb scheme?
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    When you reach City Rank 16 and get the Ravenskye History, Chapter 5 tablet the last sentence reads "Vines and rocks exploded from the ground wrapped up the village around the shrine"

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    The Lookout Station quest has a buy in shop button for the build criteria. It's also called a defensive lookout in the shop.
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    Back to Work quest - the preceding dialogue discusses collection 5k coins, but the quest criteria are for 10k.
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    When visiting Munnin, there's a Tell Munnin button for the visit rewards pop up.
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    Hi, i put here the infos from english into german:

    232 of your friends need energy now! - 232 Deiner Freunde benötigen jetzt Energie!

    Windling-Skulptur - Windskulptur

    Brisling-Skulptur - Trinkskulptur

    Airboard-Laden better Luftschiff-Laden



    edit: The City name on the right side - like Astrid´s Town is in german:

    small town - Ansiedlung
    town - Dorf
    average town - wachsendes Dorf/werdende Stadt
    city - Stadt
    average City - Kreisstadt
    Big City - Grossstadt (like Hamburg)
    if there are many small cities nearby and the have no justment (justice) - we call it "Landkreis"

    small castle, build for lower costs - Burg
    castle (good dekoration, expensive) - Schloss

    Ravenskye City - it is better, you do´nt give it a german name. ;-)
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    Another holdover from Fair, I think. When visiting neighbors, the Return Home button shows the following on mouseover:

    "Return Home: Click to return to your own fair."

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    In the cursor menu on the right: 2 times Rotate Rotate, the first one should be Move

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    This is kinda like a typo... I guess...



    The King Melon Helmet is green when it drops, as opposed to the purple version in the collection screen.

    I'd try to get you a screenshot, but with the growth times of King Melons and the difficulty of trying to get that particular reward and pull off the screenshot before it goes away I hope this will suffice.

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    In the skye shop, the specials are 4 for the price of 5! Not really a good deal is it?

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    when building tonys farm house i did not have enough gold morter so it poped up about asking friends for the gold morter but insted of gold morter it said i need punkin pie to finishs the farm house lol

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    insted of gold morter it said i need punkin pie to finishs the Fowler Mill see here --->
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    LOL Supposed to be Golden Mortar needed Not Plupmkin Pies LOL All though thinking pie sounds good about now.

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    Hi The Quest from Niles to deliver the Blue Prints Jeffery Right before the Inappropriate Puffin has very wierd wording in it that didn't really make since at first when reading it see attached picture.

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    The part that makes it confusing to read is full

    Not sure if its supposed to be that Jeffery has a quirky speech pattern or what, but generally one would not use the word full as descriptive phrase for awesome. The sentence would flow better and be more grammatically sound as reading it as "Oh, well these blueprints are... they're just awesome!", or "... they're totally awesome!", or something similar.

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    royal City Commons, the Tip at the bottom of the Quest says you need Freight Stamps, but you only need mortar, gustone, canvas and snagvine.



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